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The edit looks fantastic. There are/were some minor issues -
- General labor speed and Global Work Speed are related but different things so I'm not sure which you intended to link to.
- Its probably relevant to note that a hand talon is only used on one arm, so you can use 1 bionic arm and 1 hand talon, or 1 archotech leg and 1 knee spike
- When comparing weapons, usually its fine to not mention quality because you can assume "of the same quality", however as implants don't have quality I'd suggest adding "compared to a X quality steel longsword"
- Manipulation does improve Melee Hit Chance so I changed "dedicated fighter" to "dedicated gunfighter" just to be clear. I know you've made the point above that dedicated melee weapons are better for melee pawns, but we don't want someone using implant weapons over bionics for their melee pawn because they think it can't hurt. A clearer statement that bionics do help melee pawns might be better.
I made some a minor edit that addresses some of that but have a look and feel free to revert any of those changes. Also if you'd like to use any images, you can upload files from the left hand side bar. Though I think the article stands on its own now.
Overall, it looks great and its ready to be applied to other pages.