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12 - Unclear. I can see the following objects in your guide: Make a sauna, send people to cryptosleep, make cannibalism, research some technologies and make a plantation room. A standard internet reader is unintelligent and ignorant, he will read this and give up because he doesnt wanna read texts about how to do those things. You need to be much more objective than this.
 
12 - Unclear. I can see the following objects in your guide: Make a sauna, send people to cryptosleep, make cannibalism, research some technologies and make a plantation room. A standard internet reader is unintelligent and ignorant, he will read this and give up because he doesnt wanna read texts about how to do those things. You need to be much more objective than this.
  
13 - Bad pictures. You didnt remove the UI, you didnt focus on the part that matter, you made it all so small that I cant see anything on them, I dont see the point of many of them. Your best pictures are the one killing pets and the cannibalism freezer but I still dont see the point in them.
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13 - Bad pictures. You didnt remove the UI, you didnt focus on the part that matter, you made it all so small that I cant see anything on them and I dont see the point of many of them. Your best pictures are the one killing pets and the cannibalism freezer but I still dont see the point in them.
  
 
14 - Unnecessary advises. You dont need to tell people a lot of things because they are way too basic or pointless, like:
 
14 - Unnecessary advises. You dont need to tell people a lot of things because they are way too basic or pointless, like: