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| − | How recent is recent? You've been working on those pages on and off for a while. Gonna assume the last few days, | + | How recent is recent? You've been working on those pages on and off for a while. Gonna assume the last few days, and only talk about the changes relative to the page state before. Lemme know if you wanna talk about a longer block of time/go over the page as a whole in depth. |
| − | Re: Raid points, taking recent as since the 19th of Feb. The edits are pretty much perfect. The only issue I have is that the "1 pawn point is worth x storyteller wealth" might get confused as a true equality, where it adds to storyteller wealth directly. This should be understood by people reading the whole page, but its a pretty convoluted topic, and people might skip sections. Basically just idiot/newb proofing. I'd probably reword it to something like "Given (threshholds/pawn count etc), pawn points increases by 1 for every increase of x in storyteller wealth". I know its not something you started, its used elsewhere on the page but it is something I'd fix. | + | Re: Raid points, taking recent as since the 19th of Feb. |
| + | * The edits are pretty much perfect. The only issue I have is that the "1 pawn point is worth x storyteller wealth" might get confused as a true equality, where it adds to storyteller wealth directly. This should be understood by people reading the whole page, but its a pretty convoluted topic, and people might skip sections. Basically just idiot/newb proofing. I'd probably reword it to something like "Given (threshholds/pawn count etc), pawn points increases by 1 for every increase of x in storyteller wealth". I know its not something you started, its used elsewhere on the page but it is something I'd fix. | ||
| + | Re: Wealth, taking recent as since 17 of January. | ||
| + | * No issues with those edits themselves, though the page does overlap significantly with the other two. The examples might be best on Wealth Management, the raid points are largely duplicates of parts of Raid Points. Duplicates like that make it harder to maintain and keep everything consistent (For example: [[Genes]] gets updated but the xenotype pages listing gene details don't - one reason I'm considering making their lists more like [[Hussars]] or template-izing them). It might be better to treat the page as a sort of "big disambiguation" or summary - give summaries and basics but leave detail to the main pages - basically all the other subsections would be fine as-is but analysis and raid points would shrink. But honestly that is just nitpicking. | ||
| − | Re: Wealth | + | Re: Wealth Management taking recent as since 20 Feb. |
| − | + | * Again perfect. Solved the info duplication issue I had with the page, but left the important details. You could add the same short eqn summary for the other wealth bands, but again just nitpicking. The page as a whole is in a good state, and can definitely have the under construction banner removed now. Long term, some worked examples of common strategies people use might be good and some analysis of the expectation thresholds (and likely more importantly, how they trigger other things like Ideo requirements). The examples from Wealth are a good basis for the first one - a lot of the things people avoid like the plague actually have minimal effect on raid points. | |
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