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| ā | You could make it better by stating the general purpose of the weapon in the first or second sentence. However, to say that a weapon is the 'best' weapon at any stage would be quite subjective and is best left to the 'Analysis' part below. | + | You could make it better by stating the general purpose of the weapon in the first or second sentence. However, to say that a weapon is the 'best' weapon at any stage would be quite subjective and is best left to the 'Analysis' part below, as such I relocated the sentence there. |