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− | + | "A localized, intense lightning storm in one area of the map. Causes big fires. Clicking the envelope icon offers the option to jump to the location where the strikes will be. It also has the side effect of disabling rain." | |
− | + | In this paragraph, the pronoun 'it' has unclear antecedent. Does clicking the envelope icon disable the rain, or does the storm, or the event itself? I'm guessing it's the event, in which case "This event also has the side effect of disabling rain" would work better. | |
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